sir, please check my design , regards

Please give your feedback on #20143951 and #20143950. Thank You.

please check the design and sent your feedback#20153699 and #20153700 #20153701

If you think its not close then can you please explain me what you want from scratch so i can try again ? I really dont want to GIVE Up .. i want to try and see its a bit challenge for me too . Please at list send me soem feedback on other designs i submitted ?

please check and feedback #20206128,#20206129... regards