New Tattoo being creative with my kids names

This is what a business in United States was looking for in their tattoo design

I have an old design of a tattoo I wanted to get across my back. It's my kids names AJ CHASE KATIE in a design but not easily seen. I like the design but wanted to update it with less of a pointy look and more I guess tribal look.

I also wanted to take the design and modify it to be vertical incase I wanted it down my back instead of across or down the back of my arm.

Feel free to be creative and propose new designs with the names but I do want this one less spiky. Will pay for both the redesign and any new designs

As an update. I want the names not easily seen like in my uploaded design. I like that it doesn’t look like names till you look at it for a bit.

Just want to be super clear. I don’t want to be able to see the names. The whole desire is to have them hidden in the design. Read more