Project Mayhem G2 - Recruit Fight Club's next Generation of PM

This is what PROJECT MAYHEM was looking for in their logo design

I am looking for a revised version of the attached "PM" logo and attached a version of what I had in mind ("Concept2"). Ideally the "P" can be larger and it would look more like the original "Patch PM Logo" and/or "Project Mayhem Cropped Logo". My hope was to make the revised logo look more like paint brush strokes since the first assignment of Project Mayhem (in Fight Club) was to paint the green smiley-face on the side of a building. I would like two versions of the logo, one with just the "PM" and the other with "Project (top)" and "Mayhem (bottom)". Read more