Feedback please on my submission. Thanks

Hello Project Owner,

Not sure how to start this ad. I have a few questions.

#1. Do you want the image of the hand holding the earth to be use?
#2. How big should the image of the product be? From my visual view, I'm not sure what it is.
#3. Are there any additional image that can be used?
#4. Are there any specifications for the product?

Thanks,

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#1 hand holding the earth with the oil derricks shows lends itself to the market potential of the product. some are using it as is some are giving variations of it. i thought the most impressive one is shown at http://hillaryinc.com/hillary_images/design.gif

#2 its all about the product so it definitely needs to stand out. what it is is in the brief, an integrated contouring head with live spindle.....it''s used to mill the customer''s product out of steel but i would not get that graphic with it''s use as the reader will know what it is when he sees it.

#3 i will upload some additional images

#4 the product is extremely technical and the specifications are very in depth. about the only thing that the ad needs to show is in the copy itself.