Hi,
I've submitted my design. Please let me know what you think; I will happily work on it further given appropriate feedback and additional information on your preferences. Thanks, and good luck with your choice!

Hi. Is it about computer games or sports games?

computer games

Hi,

I have submitted some designs I believe answer your brief, I would appreciate feedback so that I can improve the design to further fulfill your requirements.

Thanks,

Andy.

Feedback goes a long way, to get the design you want I suggest providing feedback so we can provide you with the logo you want.

Yep, I am currently gathering feedbacks from the rest of my team (there are 5 of us) and am also overseas on holiday. I will pass feedbacks soon