Please check my design, send feedback to see if im in the right track

Hi,
Would love some feedback. :)

hi,

Project owner, thanks for your valuable feedback. I will go through your brief properly and try again.


creativezone

Hi, As per your brief i had made some design and submitted ,


Please give me your precious feedback for the design so i can fulfill your requirements and give you best of best design

Thanks and awaiting for you feedback

Hello ,


May i have your valuable feedback for the updated design


Thanks and awaiting for your feedback

500 designs and you still invite people to work on your project?

Thanks but no thanks.

You just sent me an invite to design a logo for your company. You have 487 logo designs already.
There must be a good logo in that collection. At least 10% should be very nice. That quantity of designs for one project is very unusual. I respectfully decline.

Thanks for the invite! I respectfully decline - too many submissions and not to much detail or direction on which you want the design to really go. We are indeed designers and not mind readers! Goodluck!

feedback please....

Kindly feedback for improvement if you like it :)