Hi I just submitted a design to the project. If you have the time I would love to receive some feedback so I can improve on the design.

Thanks :)

Some feedback, Please... good or bad, both are welcome...
Thank you

Hi Alexandra,
Whilst yours is an attractive design I have asked a few people in the office for their feedback. They said that the yellow writing is not accessible, i.e. it is not easy to read yellow writing on any background. The symbol does not clearly express what our organisation is on about.
Thanks for submitting your design. all the best with your creative work.
yours,
Cecilia

Hi De-Anne,
Thank you for submitting your design and the alterations as requested. we've received some great concepts. although we liked your design we are favouring another one which more clearly represents the goals of our program.
Thank you for your interest and all the best with your creative work.
Yours,
Cecilia