feedback me on design #36930684 , regards

hi sir please check my design #36930914,, feedback please thank you...

Design Id #36935134 Feedback Plz

Hi There,
I’ve just submitted a design for your project (ID: #36935286)
It would mean a lot if you could take a look at the description, where I’ve shared the thoughts behind the concept.
I look forward to hearing your feedback!
Thank you for your time and consideration.
Best regards,
Ha.Connick

I would like to see some options without the Arrow. Open to BBW or BBW LLC.

feedback please!