Feedback me on design #36208402, Regards

Hi dear contest owner, Please check out my design #36208708 . I hope you will like it. If you need any change please let me know. Thank you. Have a nice day. The great care !

Hi There,
I’ve just submitted a design for your project (ID:#36215838).
It would mean a lot if you could take a look at the description, where I’ve shared the thoughts behind the concept.
I look forward to hearing your feedback!
Thank you for your time and consideration.
Best regards,
Ha.Connick

Feedback needed.
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