I have updated the brief with the border styles i like. please take a look.

or we concentrate just on the surname ? in a grand calligraphy style- as seen in brief.

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see in the brief how to write i. the scroll the hebrew date. thanks
i like your frame so thats why i would love to work with you... thanks

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