feedback please on design 32482389. and 32482390 , thanks

Hi there- Thank you for your submission. The logo is looking too corporate. Please see comments about font and adjust. I also think the logo is too busy- let's pick a cardinal or a putter and go with that!

i got , and i made two variation for your review , please check them design ( 32483488 and 32483489 ) , if you need any changes please feedback me inside of design , its public comment box here , thanks. :)

please give me a feedback ##4064077, thank you so much, regards.