Dear Sir
I've submitted my design, your feedback would be highly appreciated!
Open to doing revisions

Thank you!

Give me a feedback of my design

Hi everyone!! You guys are doing an amazing job can I ask though if you have a fishing hook as part of your design for me to take it out please ?? Thanks
Also disregard my original colour palette and do one that you think would be appropriate or make the logo black white and grey ??
Another thing , if you have sharp edges in your design please smooth them out ??
Thanks and good luck ??