Hi, I submitted an entry; please review the design (#30367133), and please provide direct feedback on my entry. I hope to hear you soon. Thank you!

Looking forward to your valuable feedback, Thank you!

I want something that does not have the thick bulky lines and easy to read for the PA

Hi, I followed your feedback and added some revisions; please review the design (#30402443), and let me know if you still need changes; I hope to hear you again. Thank you!

plz check (#30409369) Thanks