feedback, please on my submission designs #30115315 and #30115316 thanks

Looking forward to your valuable feedback, Thank you!

Hello Blackstone,

I like that you incorporated the outline of our state in the design. The design itself just seems a little compacted. Can you open it up a little so its reads better?

thanks a lot for your response,
please check my updated designs #30119855 and #30119856, and please feedback to me on my personal design,
not publically. thanks again

We liked the initial design, though incorporating AZ as outline would get us closer to what we were looking for. Like the font, but felt it was too plain looking. Thank you for working with us.