feedback me on design 29813467 and 29813468 , thanks

please check my submission #29821425 and feedback please thank you ..

plz chq #29836339 #29836374

Hi, Matt Holmes!

I have submitted my design #29821821 and I appreciate it if you can provide me feedback, please don't hesitate to ask if you need any changes.

Best regards,
Adeliow

Feedback is most appreciated thank you