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Hi there! Can you please clarify what kind of style you are looking for? For example, do you want a very realistic Phoenix in greyscale, or are you looking more for stylised linework? If you have any examples of tattoos and styles you like then that would be a big help!

Line work. Sorry so vague! I’m attaching a photo of something like what I’m looking for. But I’m wanting the bird to be better proportioned and I don’t want all the “stuff” in and around. And grayscale. Hope that helps!

Hello please check I upload 1st version of the tattoo please check the bird,if it ok then we can draw other things step by step.please leave a feedback then we can change anything you need,Thank you

I added 2 more drawings. I’m looking for more of a line drawing, like the small picture. But I want it more like the tribal version I added pic of. That has lines that are a little too thick and I want the Phoenix head up, like it is in the line drawing. Then I want the other symbols embedded into the Phoenix. Horse head in wing, name in Cursive font as if part of long tail feather, and deathly hallows with similar lines integrated into body. Want the symbols to look as it part of the design and not overlaid.

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