feedback me on my submitted design #29534180 and #29534181 , thanks

please provide feedback on my entry #29551903

Thank you for your submission. We want simple and elegant. There is just too much going on in your submission.

let's check my revised design 29552370 and 29552371 , and feedback me on that again , thanks

please check my revised design (#29548426)

Hello sir ,please look at my design #29560222 and tell me how it is ?

please check the update version #29563506