please check my design #29338744 feedback please, Thank you

Thank you to all the designers. We have some great submissions so far. Just for the record, the area we are from is named after the Bald cypress tree. I should have included that in the overview. I apologize.
I would like to see a more modern twist to the design. Most of the submissions are your normal badge lacrosse logos you see if you googled “ lacrosse logo”. Just looking for a more up to date rendition. Again, blank canvas ….
Thanks!!!

Hello sir, I have sent some design concepts #29343764, please check, I hope you like this concept, thank you

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Feedback on my entry! and give your valuable suggestion for further revisions.

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