Would like to get your views on my concept.

Hi Neil, thanks for your design. Your design is very similar to our original logo. This is not a judgement, just an observation at this stage.t

feedback please, (#29174921) (#29174922) (#29174923).. Thanks

Please check my design

Thanks very much for the reply.
Please feel free to ask for any kind of changes you wish to see.

Dear Project Owner,
If you don't like the design please just eliminate them or leave them unrated (a low rating of 1-3 stars damages designer's overall rating).
Thank you for your understanding