feedback me on my submitted design #29157488 and #29157489 , thanks

Looking forward to your valuable feedback,

Dear Honorable Sir,

Possible feedback on my design #29191910 would be much-appreciated .

Thank you.

#29193046
Logotype
Check my uploads and message me about it.
Thanks
A.Studio

Please i have put my time and effort , it would be appreciated if you look at my submitted designs