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Hi Birdcage! I like your design a lot, but collectively and in a poll my colleagues chose another design. I will award that designer the fee. However, the good news is that I'd like to use your design to update my logo ) I could pay you the same amount. But would want any tweaks and work we do to make the logo and business card look right included in that $370 fee.
Does that work for you?
I will need a few minor tweaks. Like the name of the new logo is Eastern Integrative Health and not Chicago Healing Collective. Also the CHC would need to be EIH. I think the inside may be just a bit too busy. I like that it looks like something is happening in there (like the meridians in the body for acupuncture and the geometry of medicine) but it may be a tinsy bit too busy. Maybe removing the smaller triangle or something simple? Also maybe a version where the lettering is just a bit stronger. Also when it comes to making this into a business card, I had a card that had the lettering in gold and that looked pretty cool, wondering if that would work here?
To compare it would be good to see these options. How would I pay you? Do we work on the side now or through this website? My email is healthfromeast@gmail.com, Mitch Harris