please check my design #28573104 feedback please ,Thank you

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Hi,
I have submitted my design.
I really appreciate If you can provide me your valuable feedback.
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I appreciate your new design but I still do not like the dot on the I, I want it to be more of the center point of the picture.

Hi,
Can you check my new design please.. (#28582402)
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hello sir i submit my design i hope you like this . if you want any changes please sent me a feedback . i do my best for you , thank you.

Good job!