Sir, please check my design #28521391 and feedback, please. Thank you.

Hello. I like this design very much. May I suggest some alterations?

Yes, sir. Please tell me. I'm always ready for work until you satisfy. I'm waiting for your reply. Thank you so much.

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I have updated the design brief. I will provide further feedback for you

Sir, please check my changes in design #28551252 and feedback, please. I'm always ready for work until you satisfy. I'm waiting for your reply. Thank you so much.

Thank you for your submission. Your design is in the top 5. I am evaluating other designs and will get back to you soon.