feedback please on design #28165559 , regards

hi project owner, I have made a logo according to the brief you provided, please check it and give a feedback.

feedback, please on my submission design #28170265. thanks

Just eliminated the design if uou dont like it, don't give rate under 4 it will make my positive rate down, give more feedback to make logo better, thanks

see our new submission for changes, Gwen.