feedback please on design #28062684 and #28062685 , thanks

Hi please provide feedback on the design below if you don't like the design please eliminate the design so I can provide something better thanks.

#28063993

#28066259

Please give feedback on this.

#28072431

Hello, I think this is the design you are looking for any changes can be made easily your feedback will be appreciated thanks.

please provide feedback #28072919