Sir, please check my design #28052138 and feedback, please.

Thank you submitting your concepts. A lot of very good ideas. The direction was to use our existing logo and come up with an icon that goes along with what we have. For those who submitted designs using a new font, we will not consider, you might want to try submitting again using our existing logo.

Hi project owner,
it would be great to know your feedback on my design #28055718.
If you don't like it, please just eliminate or leave it unrated, because 1-3 stars damages the designers rating.
Thank you for your attention.