Like the new version very much, and I also very much like the dog tags motif very much. It shows you are thinking about the subtexts of the films.

The child and the soldier are very compassionate. It would be interesting to see what the solder is facing, his aspirations, hopes, direction... could it be his wife, a town, a challenge...? I like that the strong key images (dog tag; dad and child) can work as singular motifs downline in social media. Powerful simple images, quick to grasp the sense of drama - good.

More text will need to be added as in the dog tag layout: the five film titles (30-20% of Main Title might work, but flexible); a brief descriptor "Stories about...) the website; the collaborators; a simple billing block (you don't have that yet); not sure we need the yellow line, but the tagline can be in yellow or other color in the general area of the Main Title. The series title (MT) Veterans Journey Home, please emphasize JOURNEY as that is the central topic of the film - a difficult, but hopeful return transition to civilian life - a path that is difficult for many servicemen AND servicewomen, and their families.

Thank you for your work!