feedback please!

Sir, please check my design #27735640, #27735479 and feedback, please.

Please have a look #27738395 & #27738396.

waiting for your valuable feedback and rating. If you don't like my design, please eliminate it rather than giving 1/2/3 star rating.

Thank you!

Dear sir,
possible feedback on my design #27738828 would be much-appreciated .
Regards.