look forward to your feedback on my concept (#27745504)

feedback please!

Hello owner of the contest, low ratings - one and two stars only demotivate designers to participate with new projects. Because low ratings lead the designer's rating to a crash. If you do not like a design, you better eliminate it without putting one or two stars. Thank you for your understanding

I have submitted a design. Please give your feedback for the design because it will help my future work. Thanks!