Sir, please check my designs #27678899, #27677931 and feedback, please. Thank you.

We would like to keep the logo very modern with a clean minimalist font. The example is very close to what we are looking for in keeping the general shape. The main need is the hands/ mudra of the A in the center of "asana" we want this to be a bit abstract like Chinese characters / hanzi lines.

feedback please on design #27678124 , regards