please check my design #26836047 and feedback please

please check my design #26836324

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Hi!
I present you 4 designs (#26865752 / #26865753 / #26865754 / #26865755) as per your brief. So if you like my designs give me appropriate positive feedback and remarks. For farther development please reply me.

Hi Project Owner,

I have submitted my design. Please share your feedback on that, it will help me know if i am moving in the right direction. If you would like any changes in the design feel free to say that .

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HI .. , IVE SUBMITTED A DESIGN PLEASEEE TAKE A LOOK :) THANKYOU

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