Possible feedback on my entry would be much appreciated.
thanks.  

Feedback please.

Hello Project Owner. I have submitted a design in your contest. I would appreciate if you provide me your feedback. I will do all the changes till you're satisfied. Thanks

Hi Sir. Can you please check my design and provide me your feedback?

Hi Mirna, do you require me to select your entry as the winner prior to me being able to ask for some changes

yes! Definitely

I'm late sending my project, can I send it now ....