Possible feedback on my entry would be much appreciated.
thanks.  

Hello there,
just submitted my design thought according to your brief.
Please review my design and let me know if I am on right track.

Best.

Hello!
You can use any type of FONT. no compulsory to use a calligraphy font
Kindly don't use a butterfly.

IF YOU DON'T LIKE SO PLEASE REMOVE THAT STARS AND ELIMINATE ME.

Hello

May i have you precious feedback for the design i had submitted please


Thanks and waiting for your valuable reply

Hi. I have submitted a design in your contest. Please take a look on it and let me know your feedback. Thanks :)

Hi!
I just want to know your thoughts on my latest variation based on your feedback.
I would love to hear from you soon so I can be able to adjust the design according to your requirements.

Talk to you soon.
Jeff

Hello respected project owner, first let me thank you for inviting me to be the part of your project, I have designed a logo option as per your requirements, please have a look at my entry #26539680 and let me know your feedback. Thank you :)

dear sir, could you award me second place winner for #26542731.many many Thanks.