Please provide feedback on my design..

Hi
If you don't like the design please just eleminate or don't give low rating ,1-2 star can affected so bad for designer profile
Thanks

Sir
I submitted my design and hope you like it and give me 4/5 star ratting but If you don’t like my entries kindly left me without star instant of low star(1/2/3).
Because I spend a lot of time for your design.