Feedback pls

please check #25832837

feedback please!

Hello. Perhaps it would look different in a white background instead of black. I received over 150 designs and I narrowed down to two design from the same designer at the moment. I can not disclose to you as to what design he/she submitted as it will not be fair. I am good with the font used but maybe the size and format/placement did not get my attention.

Hi,

Are you still looking for more options?