Please check my design (#25820203)

respected, a comment for the submitted design would be appreciated, if its to your likeness or not, what changes would you like to see? thanks

Dear project owner, please check number #25841809, if you don't like it, don't give low star, just eliminate it, because low star makes a bad designer profile.
I hope to get feedback from you, and if there are some revisions I would do it quickly.
thank you.