Please provide your feedback on my design concept. #25655712, #25655641

Hi
Design needs to be top quality with unique lettering if possible. Nice colours as this will dictate social media. Would like nice brown colours.

The writing shouldnt be to cursive as this might be too hard to read for some ppl. If it is somewhat cursive it should be clear.
The letters should ideally be straight i.e not slanted.

Thanks for all the effort!

Constructive critique will be appreciated.
Thank you in advance!

any news?