feedback please on design 25287695 and 25287696 , thanks

Hi Project Owner,

I have submitted my design. Please share your feedback on that, it will help me know if i am moving in the right direction. If you would like any changes in the design feel free to say that .

Thanks & regards.

NOTE:
If you don't like this design, please leave it with ZERO stars. Or eliminate it without stars. Low 1 and 2 star ratings downgrade the designer's personal rating and he has no motivation to come up with new ideas.
Thank you for your understanding

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