feedback please on design 25236613 and 25236614 , thanks

Hi ! man can you please give a feedback for this entry #25238522

hello sir, please provide feedback on my design #25239723 and #25239724 ... thanks ...

If you don't like this desing, leave it whit ZERO stars.Or eliminate

it whitout stars.Low 1 and 2 star ratings downgrade the desinger's

personal rating and he has no motivation to come up whit new ideas.

thank you for your understanding.