Please provide feedback on my design..

please check my design #25184503, thank you

Hi,
I am glad to participate in your project.
A proper feedback in this kind of work is crucial, so if it is possible I count on yours for the following submission;
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It would help me in further refining the design. Feel free to suggest any alterations.
Looking forward for a positive and constructive feedback.

If you don´t like my approach just comment and eliminate, because low rating is not fair for our kind of work and downs our global rating. Thank you for the opportunity!

Best regards,