hello sir, please provide feedback on my design #25147886 and #25147887 ... thanks ...

Please sir check my design #25148577

Dear Contest Owner,
Please delete all 1 or 2-star ratings and prefer to eliminate such logo designs, because in this stupid DesignCrowd system it drastically lowers the designer's rating and discourages participation. Only rate proposals with 3 or more stars.
Thanks

please check my new design

Creative???