Please provide feedback on my design.

I just submitted my design thought according to your brief.Please review my design and let me know if I am on right track.
Design ID -#24582104

feedback please ............

Hey sir, can you please delete the star that you gave, because it has an effect on my sata account. Thank you

Hello Sir
If you don't like my work so please eliminate my design without given low ( 1 or 2 ) star as if you given me low rating it's very harmful for my profile hope you understand..
If you possible to remove all one or two star and eliminate those entries which you do not like...
Thanks

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