hello sir,
please check and feedback please on my design, #24485805, #24485807.
Rating Guide: If you like any design rate it between 3-5 stars, otherwise just 'eliminate' it. Rating 1-2 stars severely impact the designer profile and hence limits to contribute more submissions to contest. Thanks for understanding.
thanks and regards.

feedback please...

Thank you for your design, it is not quite what I am looking for as I narrow down to the shortlist.