feedback on my designs please.

It's not bad, but please delete IT system. Product is "sCore" of course without quote. IT system is just a guideline to you know the industry.

Hi There,

I have submitted my designs and I really appreciate if you can provide me a feedback.

Thank You.

I have submitted a design. Please give your feedback for the design because it will help my future work. Thanks!

Hello sir,
Please check my design and let me know your feedback. And im able able for any further revision
Thank you
Best regards.

Greetings, kindly review my designs and let me know your feedback for updates if any.
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Please check my message thanks!