Hi, Can you send me feedback to see if I can improve my proposals?

Thanks!

we really like your design as it is very considerate and artistic - the most artistic than all the submissions; i have added some attachments of the type of logo that we are looking for however which is a little bit different - we hope the images may assist with amending the design if you are willing to? please let us know if this helps?
my best regards, Tash

we really like your design as it is very considerate and artistic - the most artistic than all the submissions; i have added some attachments of the type of logo that we are looking for however which is a little bit different - we hope the images may assist with amending the design if you are willing to? please let us know if this helps?
my best regards, Tash