Any colour preference?

Can you check out this design and provide your feedback #23398569 #23398570 .

I have submitted a design. Please give your feedback for the design because it will help my future work. Thanks!

Respected Sir/Madam,
I have submitted my work,I hope you like it, please go through it once
and tell me if it is worth your company's prestige.
The colors and the font in the design can be changed.
Please, also kindly tell me my shortcomings, if any?
As it will help me in improving my future work.
THANK YOU.