Hello,
I have submitted my design and I really appreciate if you can provide me feedback.
Thank You.

Dear client plz have a look on my design and waiting for your valuable feedback.
Thank you

The x at the end doesn’t fit, the company’s name is RDS

It looks nice, really clean. It doesn’t pop, needs something to get it there..

sir pls check #22892382 and sir 1 and 2-star rating lowers a designer overall ranking so I hope you'll understand this.
kind regards.