Feedback please

Thank you so much for submitting a design! Your design is very beautiful, but we were thinking of a slightly different approach. We would prefer that there were no leaves. We like the petals, but would like a little more color. Also, in the middle of the circle could you not use the dots in the middle please. You can add a very subtle design in the middle, but we want the name to pop.

Hello there,
I just submitted my design thought according to your brief.Please review my design and let me know if I am on right track.

Best.

Hi, is that how you want it?

Feedback please (#22126785)