Possible feedback on my entry would be muchly appreciated.
Thanks.

Hi

As per your brief i had submitted design, please give your precious feedback for submitted design, as still we are working on your project, so if you have any specific requirement please let us know so we can incorporate on rest of design on which we are working for you.

Thanks and awaiting for your valuable feedback

sir feedback on my designs and kindly give 4 or 5 star rating please and kindly no 1 or 2 star ratings please if you don't like them you can eliminate them simply .
1 and 2 star rating lowers a designers overall ranking so i hope you'll understand this.
kind regards.