Kindly provide your feedback on my entry work, thanks

Hi there! I just submitted my entry today and carefully crafted my submission, Kindly check design (#21743813) and (#21743812), I look forward to see your feedback. Thanks!

sir, please check my entry #21745137

Hay
could you submit a different design, not to fond of that design thanks

Here is my new design and i have made it with your requirements.Here is my entry (#21757843)
I hope you like it.

Hi there! May I ask if we have some updates here? I'm looking forward to hear your thoughts about my entry. Thanks!